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Text from nadya_osta - English

    • The hobbit

    • Dear Dairy.
    • Now I'm staying in an Elvish village, the Rivendell.
    • My way was very difficult.
    • We forded rivers, across valleys, bogs, dark ravines!
    • We were met merry elves.
  • They were singing a song about us.
  • My friends, dwarves, don't live elves.
  • I like Elvis sings and I would want to sit with this singer, but can't.
    • I was tiring of a long trip and was waiting for rest.
  • A master of the Last Homely House was waiting for us.
    • I ate deliciously, washed myself and went to bed.
  • We decided to stay here for a few days.

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