批改

现在就来帮忙修正吧！改好了

從Maryam1987來的文本 - English

    • would you please correct my text? Thank you so much

    • The rates of a country's exports are showing in the below diagram from 2015 to 2016.
    • This below chart shows that the percentage changing for per goods exports in 2015 and 2016.
    • Although five products are tested, this essay tends to start from the materials which could have significant impacts on the export.
    • Firstly, petroleum products could make 6 million dollars in 2015 and more than this amount in 2016.
    • When looking at this substance in the below table we will realize that its value increased by about 3 percent during two years.
    • Secondly, engineered goods are the second category in both chart and table, it has the same value as petroleum products.
    • Next, gem and jewelry opposite of other products has been a relative decline in income by the 2016 year, this trend decreased by over 5 percent during this time.
    • However, it made money about 40 million that is more than two other categories such as agriculture and textiles.
    • In addition, the agricultural product forth causes; it had a slight increase of about 0.81 percent from 2015 to 2016 for this material.
    • Textiles with 25 million profits in 2015 could rise more than 15 percent so its income reached 30 million in 2016.

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

  • 标题
  • 句子 1
  • 句子 2
  • 句子 3
    • Although five products are tested, this essay tends to start from the materials which could have significant impacts on the export.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Although five products are tested, this essay tends to start from the materials which could havepresented in the diagram, this essay focuses on goods which have the most significant impacts on the exportcountry's exports trade.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
  • 句子 4
  • 句子 5
    • When looking at this substance in the below table we will realize that its value increased by about 3 percent during two years.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • When lookAccording ato this substancee data re: petroleum exports in the below table, we will realizsee that itsthe value increased by about 3of petroleum products increased three percent duringover a two -years period.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
  • 句子 6
    • Secondly, engineered goods are the second category in both chart and table, it has the same value as petroleum products.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Secondly, engineered goods are the second categManufactured goods category, which is the second highest source of exporyt income according to both the chart and table, it has the same value as petroleum product exports.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
  • 句子 7
    • Next, gem and jewelry opposite of other products has been a relative decline in income by the 2016 year, this trend decreased by over 5 percent during this time.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Next, gem and jewelry opposite of other products has been a relative decline in income by the 2016 year, this trend decreased by over 5 percent during this timeIn contrast, precious gems saw a decline of more than five percent between 2015 and 2016.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
  • 句子 8
    • However, it made money about 40 million that is more than two other categories such as agriculture and textiles.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • However, it made mostill earneyd about 40 million that, which is more than two otherhe next two categories such as, i.e., agricultureal and textile exports.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
  • 句子 9
    • In addition, the agricultural product forth causes; it had a slight increase of about 0.81 percent from 2015 to 2016 for this material.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • In addition, the agricultural productAgricultural exports, the fourth causes; it hahighest export commodity included in the diagram, showed a slight increase of about 0.81 percent frombetween 2015 toand 2016 for this material.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
  • 句子 10
    • Textiles with 25 million profits in 2015 could rise more than 15 percent so its income reached 30 million in 2016.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Textiles with exports, which earned 25 million profits in 2015, could rise by more than 15 percent so its income reachedand earn as much as 30 million in 2016. ¶
      exRangerexRanger profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10