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  • Feelings

    • He has intense feelings.When he is happy he is the happiest öne.When he is unhappy he is the saddest....How can I express this sentence in a better way

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    • He has intense feelings.When he is happy he is the happiest öne.When he is unhappy he is the saddest....How can I express this sentence in a better way
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    • He has intense feelings .When he is happy he is one of the happiest önpeople alive. When he is unhappy he is one of the saddest....How can I express this sentence in a better way people alive.
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