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- Learn English
Hi!
- I'm Camila and I'd like to learn English because my dream is to travel to NY.
- I want to work with class English.

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- I'm Camila and I'd like to learn English because my dream is to travel to NY.
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- I'm Camila and I'd like to learn English because my dream is to travel to NYew York (City?).
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- I want to work with class English.
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- I want to work with class English.¶
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  NOTE: Do you mean you'd like to work as a teacher of English or teach a subject using English or study English in a classroom setting? Your original statement is worded is a way that makes its meaning unclear.
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