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  • Evidence: Writing my personal statement

    • Evidence: write my personal statement Evidence: write my personal statement “I am an electromechanical engineer with a determined person who works hard to achieve good results in life.
  • So I looked for scholarships that would allow me to study for a master's degree in the United States.
    • After a long search in the process, I received a scholarship from the United States at a fifty percent discount to study a Master in Electromechanics, the university.
    • I was asked about my achievements as a student, I told them to participate in the design and development of a machine for shredding grass, in the technical institution where I work, and participate in the "World Skills Olympics", there the participants design and build a machine in three days, representing the Cundinamarca region of the Seine, in the ability to challenge teams and manufacturing.
    • Another of my projects were electronic devices controlled by cell phones and other systems, which led me to classify the regional phase that represents Boyacá in science and technology, and the following phase I collaborated in the design and development of a wind generator, alternating current for the "technical college of marshal sucre de Boavita de Boavita", In the space girls project, I taught in the part of automation and design of electrical control panels to the space girls first Latin American girls who won a contest in which they designed a prototype of a probe to go to Mars, and his prize was to go to the NASA meeting.
  • After a long time I was assigned the scholarship to study in the USA.
    • USA, Precensialmente or virtually, but unfortunately I have to be virtual due to work problems. Thanks a lot

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    • Evidence: write my personal statement Evidence: write my personal statement “I am an electromechanical engineer with a determined person who works hard to achieve good results in life.
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    • Evidence: write my personal statement¶

      Evidence: write my personal statement¶

      “I am an electromechanical engineer
      with, and as a determined person who, I will works hard to achieve goodreat results in life.
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    • After a long search in the process, I received a scholarship from the United States at a fifty percent discount to study a Master in Electromechanics, the university.
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    • After a long search in the process, I received a scholarship from the United States at a fifty percent discount to study and receive a Masters in Electromechanics, the university.
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    • I was asked about my achievements as a student, I told them to participate in the design and development of a machine for shredding grass, in the technical institution where I work, and participate in the "World Skills Olympics", there the participants design and build a machine in three days, representing the Cundinamarca region of the Seine, in the ability to challenge teams and manufacturing.
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    • I was asked about my achievements as a student, I told them to participate in the design and development of a machine for shredding grass, in the technical institution where I work, and participate in the "World Skills Olympics", there, the participants designed and buildt a machine in three days, representing the Cundinamarca region of the Seine, exhibiting the ability to challenge teams and additional skills such as manufacturing.
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    • Another of my projects were electronic devices controlled by cell phones and other systems, which led me to classify the regional phase that represents Boyacá in science and technology, and the following phase I collaborated in the design and development of a wind generator, alternating current for the "technical college of marshal sucre de Boavita de Boavita", In the space girls project, I taught in the part of automation and design of electrical control panels to the space girls first Latin American girls who won a contest in which they designed a prototype of a probe to go to Mars, and his prize was to go to the NASA meeting.
      Vote now!
    • Another of my projects wereas an electronic devices controlled by cell phones and other systems, which led me to classify the regional phase that represents Boyacá in science and technology, and the following phase I collaborated in the design and development of a wind generator, alternating current for the "technical college of marshal sucre de Boavita de Boavita", In the space girls project, I taught in the part of automation and design of electrical control panels to the space girls first Latin American girls who won a contest in which they designed a prototype of a probe to go to Mars, and his prize was to go to the NASA meeting.
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