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• PROFILE • Senior year of chemical&petroleum engineering Msc student with 2 years of laboratory research experience of bitumen rheology • A wide knowledge across petroleum, chemical and energy resources enginnering • Discovered hysteresis behavior of viscosity of bitumen and bitumen/solvent mixutres and tried to link its behavior to a colloid model • Experienced with softwares: Rheocalc, Microsoft Office, CMG STARS Reservoir situlation, HYSYS and Matlab • Precise sampling, data entry, analytical and probrom solving skills gained through repeated data acquisition process and trouble-shooting by adjusting variations of expermental data • Strong communication skill developed from continuous discussions with a supervior and fast reflection of feedback EDUCATION Sept.2018 - Aug.2020 (Expected) Master of science in Chemical & Petroleum Engineering University of -- , --- • Cumulative GPA 3.8/4.0 (Currently) • Graduate research with a topic regarding rheology of bitumen Mar.2013 - Aug.2017 Bachelor of Engineering in Energy Resourses Engineering ----- University, ------ • Cumulative GPA 4.06/4.50, Major GPA 4.29/4.50 • Honor Student during 6 semesters • ---- Petroleum Student Club activities - translated books of Petroleum Engineering in Korean, read Journals and taught basics of Petroleum Engineering to members Mar.2014 - Aug.2017 Interdisciplinarity Degree in Offshore Plant Engineering --- University, ----- RESEARCH EXPERIENCE Sept.2018 - Present Graduate student laboratory researcher, ------- team University of ---- • Research title: Hysteresis of bitumen and observation of binary solvent/bitumen mixtures in micro-scale • Measured the viscosity of bitumen and bitumen/solvent mixtures by rheometer and analyzed rheological behavior of bitumen by Rheocalc and excel • Observed samples under optical microscope and Atomic Force Microscopy • Obtained academic understanding in rheology and viscosity of bitumen through the review of 40+ research papers • Learned skills of sampling, experimental design, data analysis and data entry July.2016 - Aug.2016 Well logging research assistant, ----- Division The ---- Institute of ---- • Analyzed well logging data and calculated porosity, water saturation, and shale potion by using Techlog • Delivered presentations on the results of well-logging analyzation WORK EXPERIENCE Sept.2016 - Nov.2016 Overseas Training of Development of Energy Resources, ----- ------ office of ------ company, ----- • Learned the basics field techniques of gas production and processing and delivered presentations in a team • Reviewed a paper of project development plan including a scope of the project from agreement, geology and petrophysics to operations • Summarized daily business meeting calls from ---- gas offshore plant and sent it by email to Korean staff VOLUNTEER Sept.2015 - Dec.2015 Math & English tutor, Dream Maker International • Taught Mathmatics and English to students who grow up in single-parent family and suffur from financial hardship to study.