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    • Accidentally in love

    • The first time I met him I couldn't know what he would have meant to me then.
    • That school year ended fast and I thought that I wouldn't have seen him anymore: we lived far away and he was older than me by three years.
    • We had spent so many breaks looking at each other, hoping that we could have met someday, and I knew that sometimes he asked for me to a classmate of mine, Margherita, who was his best friend and also a good friend of mine.
  • There was only one problem: he was engaged.
  • His girlfriend was nice, I must admit.
  • She was a redhead with long, curly hair and a bad temperament...
    • A girl completely different from me, in short, who had hair black as the night and a sweet glance.
    • One evening I met him in my favourite club and danced together just for a while, before he went away, and it happened also other evenings.
    • I don't know if it was a coincidence, but I started to see him walking around the city center with his friends, more and more often, but maybe was just 'cause I paid it attention now.
  • Meanwhile I discovered that he broke up with Cleo, the redhead...
    • There has been a kiss in the club, last saturday, a sweet wonderful kiss, while he stroked my face and hair and I was so happy I could die; then I've seen him monday, hangin' out with his friend.
    • We were both embarassed and silent, like nothing happened.
    • He had also my number, but didn't send me any sms.
  • Yesterday we kissed again and now I'm so high and confused!

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English