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  • COVER LETTER

    • As a student in my first year in international political science at University Paris-Est Creteil located in the city of Creteil, I am writing to express my determination and my interest to participate in language travel Programs.
    • This internship could effectively allow me to acquire my first real and significant experience in a foreign country.
    • Being determined and serious, I will be able to take advantage of the benefits of a foreign experience in my professional life as well as in my personal life.
    • This language course is as indispensable for my university course as the implementation of my professional course.
    • Since the beginning of the year, outside of class, I work as a hostess in events and many of them are in English.
    • It is could be a way to complement this experience.
    • This year I have the chance to participate in the “ citizen laboratory” of Creteil in favour of young people in which we have to vote sustainable projects for the department.
    • I realised in 2017 a internship at the Ministry of Women's and Family rights.
    • It was an incredible opportunity and it strengthened me in my future prospects and my beliefs.
    • I am very interested in international news and I read regularly english newspapers.

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  • 문장 1
    • As a student in my first year in international political science at University Paris-Est Creteil located in the city of Creteil, I am writing to express my determination and my interest to participate in language travel Programs.
      투표하세요!
    • As a student in my first year first-year student studying international political science at University Paris-Est Creteil located in the city of, in Creteil, I am writingwish to express my determination and my interest to participate in linterest in the Language tTravel Programs.
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  • 문장 2
    • This internship could effectively allow me to acquire my first real and significant experience in a foreign country.
      투표하세요!
    • This internship cParticipating in this program would eaffectively allow meord me the opportunity to acquire my, first real hand, significant experience in a foreign country.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • Being determined and serious, I will be able to take advantage of the benefits of a foreign experience in my professional life as well as in my personal life.
      투표하세요!
    • Being determined and serious, I will be able to take advantage of the benefits of a foreign experience in my professional life as well as in my personal life.y participating in this program, I feel I would benefit both personally and professionally.¶

      OR ¶

      I feel I would benefit both personally and professionally by participating in this program.¶

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    • This language course is as indispensable for my university course as the implementation of my professional course.
      투표하세요!
    • This language course is as indispensable for my university course as the implementation of my professional coursemportant, and thus indispensable, as the professional coursework I am undertaking in my studies.
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    • Since the beginning of the year, outside of class, I work as a hostess in events and many of them are in English.
      투표하세요!
    • Since the beginning of the year, outside of class, I I have worked as a hostess inat several extramural events and, many of them arewhich are conducted in English.
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    • This year I have the chance to participate in the “ citizen laboratory” of Creteil in favour of young people in which we have to vote sustainable projects for the department.
      투표하세요!
    • This year I have the chanceopportunity to participate in theCreteil's citizen laboratory” of Creteil in favour of young people in which we have to vote , a program that required students to assist in the selection of "sustainable projects" for the department.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • It was an incredible opportunity and it strengthened me in my future prospects and my beliefs.
      투표하세요!
    • It was an incredible opportunity and it strengthened me in my future prospects and my beliefsexperience which strengthened my professional skills and commitment.
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    • I am very interested in international news and I read regularly english newspapers.
      투표하세요!
    • I am also very interested in international news and I read regularly english newspapers. English-language newspapers regularly.
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