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- Eugene
Hello!
My name is Anastasia.
- I am learn English .
- Today i want to say you about my the best friend is Eugene.
I have known her very long.
- She has brown hairs blue eyes.
She looks like is the most beautiful princess.
- By the way she study at school in 11 classes.
- She is a very clever girls.
- I think that friendship it is important piece for everybody because if you feel upset or bad you will to phone you friend and tell him or her about your horrible situation.It is all...
Thank you very much!!!

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- Eugene ¶¶Hello My name is Anastasia. I am learning English. Today i want to tell you about my best friend eugene. I have known her for a long time . She has brown hair and blue eyes. She looks like a beautiful princess. By the way she studies 11 classes at school.¶She is a very clever girl. I think that friendship is very important for everybody because if you feel upset or bad, you can phone your friend and tell him/her about your horrible situation.
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- Eugene - Hello, my name is Anastasia, and I'm learning English. Today I want to tell you about my best friend, Eugene. She has brown hair and blue eyes. She looks like a beautiful princess. Also, she has eleven classes at school to study for; she is a very clever girl. I think that friendship is very important for everyone, because if you feel upset or sad, you can phone your friend and tell him or her about your horrible situation.
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- Hello!
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- My name is Anastasia.
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- I am learn English .
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- I am learn English .
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- Today i want to say you about my the best friend is Eugene.
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- Today i want to ~~say~~tell you about my the best friend is Eugene.
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- Today i, I want to ~~say~~talk to you about my ~~the~~ best friend is, Eugene.
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- I have known her very long.
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- She has brown hairs blue eyes.
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- She has brown hairs and blue eyes.
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- She looks like is the most beautiful princess.
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- By the way she study at school in 11 classes.
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- By the way, she ~~study at school in 11 classes~~is in 11th grade at school.
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- By the way, she is study ~~at school in 11 classes~~ing almost 11 subjects at school.
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- She is a very clever girls.
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- She is a very clever girls.
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- She is very clever. / She is a very clever girls.
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- I think that friendship it is important piece for everybody because if you feel upset or bad you will to phone you friend and tell him or her about your horrible situation.It is all...
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- I think that friendship it is important ~~piece~~ for every~~body~~ one, because if you feel upset or bad you ~~will to phone~~can call your friend and tell him or her about your ~~horrible situation.I~~problems. That is all...
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