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    • Not enough is being done to protect endangered animals.Do you a

    • Nowadays, a lot of animals are not protected from different influences.
    • They are endangered.
    • For this reason, people should save the wildlife.
    • Beasts existence changes as well as the environment.
    • For example, polar bear is in danger of extinction due to global warming and ice melting.
    • Tiger shark can disappear due to rising sea levels.
    • Koala suffers because cutting down the trees is actual.
    • In my opinion, people do not help to creates, they are extinct.
    • Animals are our heritage, our balance between urban and wildlife.
  • How can we save them?
    • Firstly, some species need to be growing not in habitat.
    • Without a doubt, zoo is very comfortable conservation.
    • Secondly, people have to control pollution from factories.
    • Thirdly, society must change their attitude to hunt.
    • In conclusion, I agree with thought that now not enough is being done to protect endangered animals.
    • They are worth saving so that future generation can admire them.

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