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    • many families do not care much about food hygience, they pratically use the same knife and board for the cooked and raw food.
    • i stood by the beach and drank in the beauty of the seascape, with light blue shimmering water liked a enormous flawless crystal.
    • i think the fruit being in season is more delicious and nutritious than the one out of season.
    • nowadays reality show is the trendiest and most popular type of TV program because some of them give ordinary people a access to overnight success.
    • bear cookies is my favourite snake, a kind of mouth-watering but fattening cookie.

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    • many families do not care much about food hygience, they pratically use the same knife and board for the cooked and raw food.
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    • mMany families do not care mucenough about food hygience, they praticallye. They often use the same knife and board for the cooked and raw food.
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    • i stood by the beach and drank in the beauty of the seascape, with light blue shimmering water liked a enormous flawless crystal.
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    • ¶iI stood by the bseachshore and drank contemplating the beauty of the seascape, withurroundings. The light blue shimmering water was liked an enormous, flawless crystal.
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    • i think the fruit being in season is more delicious and nutritious than the one out of season.
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    • ¶iI think the fruit being in season is more delicious andat seasonal fruit is tastier and more nutritious than the one out of season fruit.
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    • nowadays reality show is the trendiest and most popular type of TV program because some of them give ordinary people a access to overnight success.
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    • ¶nNowadays, reality TV show iss are the trendiest and the most popular type of TV programs because some of them give ordinary people a access to overnight success.
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