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  • February 13th.

    • Today I did not have class, the teacher is ill.
    • Yesterday I don't read the mail, and went alone when I arrived at the classroom I waited with 2 boys and took the phone and watched the mail, after, I felt so stupid and went to visit other teacher and pick up the folders.
    • Today the weathe was sunny, now the weather is so good.
    • The city that I have be living is between the mountains, not is a valley, is a set of mountains with a river in the deep.
    • When the days sunnys, the nights are warms, for this reason I want drink a beer with my friends.
    • The city where I live has a weather very sunny and wet, is a small city in the northern of the country.

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    • Yesterday I don't read the mail, and went alone when I arrived at the classroom I waited with 2 boys and took the phone and watched the mail, after, I felt so stupid and went to visit other teacher and pick up the folders.
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    • Yesterday I doidn't read the mail, and went alone when I arrived atin the classroom. I waiteds waiting with 2 boys and took the phone and watched the mail, after, I felt so stupid and went to visit another teacher and pick up the folders.
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    • Yesterday I doidn't read the check my email, andso I went aloneto class, whenre I arrivwaited, at the classroom I waited with 2 boys and took the phone and watched the mail, after, I felt so stupidlong with two young men. While waiting I checked my messages, discovered that class had been cancelled, and so I left the room and went to visit see another teacher andto pick up thsome folders.
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    • The city that I have be living is between the mountains, not is a valley, is a set of mountains with a river in the deep.
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    • The city that I haved been living in is between the mountains, not is a valley, is a set of mountains with a river in the deep.
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    • The city that I have be living is between the mountains, not is a valley, is a set of mountains with a river in the deepin which I reside is situated in the mountains, not in the deep river valley.
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    • When the days sunnys, the nights are warms, for this reason I want drink a beer with my friends.
      투표하세요!
    • When the days sunnys, the nights are warms, for this reason, I wanon't drink a beer with my friends.
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    • When the days sunnys, the nightOn sunny days arend warms, for this reason I want nights I enjoy drink aing beer with my friends.
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    • The city where I live has a weather very sunny and wet, is a small city in the northern of the country.
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    • The city where I live has a weather very sunny and wet, it is a small city in the northern of the country.
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    • The city where I live has a weather very sunny and wet, is a small cityweather conditions in my city, which is located in the northern portion of the country, are often sunny but also damp.
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