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  • My first vacation

    • Last year I was planning to have a nice vacation, I really love travelling.
    • I had the opportunity but I wasn't sure where to go.
    • My friends were planning a vacation one week after I decided to go on my own, but they invited me to go with them.
    • They asked me If I wanted to be part of the journey, I did not think about it and I said: yes, let's go!
    • I really wanted to go out and set aside my routine.
    • The day came and we started the journey before the sun rose, I like being behind the conductor. because of the sight.
    • When we arrived to the place where we wanted to be, I was the first to shout out loud the words: "This is life" I enjoyed the place and we prepared our food, we camped there, and we saw a beautiful sunrise, a great experience so far, I had not had an experience just like that ever before.

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    • My friends were planning a vacation one week after I decided to go on my own, but they invited me to go with them.
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    • My friends, who were planning to take a vacation one week lafter I decided to go on my own, but they invited me to go with themthan me, invited me to join them on their journey.
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    • They asked me If I wanted to be part of the journey, I did not think about it and I said: yes, let's go!
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    • They asked me If I wanted to be part of the journey,. I did not think about it and I said: "yes, let's go!"
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    • TWheyn asked me Iif I wanted to be part of the journey, I did not think about it and I said: ould like to join them, I responded without hesitation "yes, let's go!"
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    • When we arrived to the place where we wanted to be, I was the first to shout out loud the words: "This is life" I enjoyed the place and we prepared our food, we camped there, and we saw a beautiful sunrise, a great experience so far, I had not had an experience just like that ever before.
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    • When we arrived to the place where we wanted to be, I was the first to shout out loud the words: "This is life!" I enjoyed the place and we prepared our food, we camped there, and we saw a beautiful sunrise, a. A great experience so far, I had not had an experience just like that ever before.
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