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  • The country of contrasts

    • I live in the biggest country, but in the smallest region of this country.
    • On the map it with a flag and connects by a chain.
    • Most Russian cities located by the lower border, because conditions here are better.
    • We have 11 timezones, so when the one part of the country just going to bed, the other one already waking up.
    • This is a country of contrasts - beautiful next to the chilling.
    • But I'd like to see all those contrasts.
    • My dream is drive through the whole country, from Vladivostok (it's where cheetah drawn) to my place, it's more than 10.000 km and will took about 2 weeks.
    • I'm sure it is an unforgettable experience and just then I'll be able to say "I saw my country, all its vastness". It worth it.

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    • This is a country of contrasts - beautiful next to the chilling.
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    • This is a country of contrasts - the beautiful next to the chilling.

      NOTE: "chilling" probably not the best term to use in your attempt to compare/contrast the "beautiful" elements of Russia to/with the less desirable elements. I recommend something like this:¶

      This is a country of contrasts: the beautiful next to the terrible.¶

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      This is a country of contrasts, i.e., the sublime next to the terrifying.¶

      Note 2: There are hundreds of such "contrast" clauses one could apply to Russia; heck, to Siberia alone.
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    • But I'd like to see all those contrasts.
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    • But I'd like to see all those contrastsexperience all of those contrasts in person.¶

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      But I'd personally like to experience all of those contrasts.¶

      NOTE: the word "but" is superfluous in this context and thus not necessary... it severs no meaningful purpose beyond that of "filler" material      .
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    • My dream is drive through the whole country, from Vladivostok (it's where cheetah drawn) to my place, it's more than 10.000 km and will took about 2 weeks.
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    • My dream is to drive through the whole country, from Vladivostok (it's where cheetah is drawn) to my place, i. It's more than 10.000 km and will tookake about 2 weeks to arrive there.
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    • MyI dream isof drive through the wholing across the entire country, from Vladivostok (it's where cheetah drawn) to my place, it's more than 10.000 km and will took about 2 weeksto my city, a trip of approximately 10.000 km that would take about two weeks to complete. ¶

      NOTE: (it's where cheetah drawn) <--- this makes no sense @ several levels, for example (1) there are no "cheetahs" anywhere in Russia, including Siberia. Perhaps you meant "tiger"? Even id you had written "tiger", what then is the "sense" of the statement "where tiger is drawn"? Is it intended to suggest this is where the Siberian tiger dwells... "comes from"... ??? Again, not accurate: the Siberian tiger's place of origin is not necessarily Vladivostok, even if examples of the species reside in that vicinity      .
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    • I'm sure it is an unforgettable experience and just then I'll be able to say "I saw my country, all its vastness". It worth it.
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    • I'm sure it is an unforgettable experience and just then I'll be able to say "I saw my country, and all its vastness". It is worth it.
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    • I'm sure it iswould be an unforgettable and worthwhile experience, and just then I'llfter which I would be able to say "I saw my country, in its entirety and all of its vastness". It worth it.
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