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Text from moonchild7 - English

    • Complete with present simple pas and present continuous pas

  • Cyber-attacks on the increase Stories of cyber-attacks are being reported (report) in the media on a regular basis, but it seems very difficult to discover who is responsible for the attacks.
    • The procedure follows a pattern: the computer records of a large organization are hacked (hack), files are stealed (steal) and then some of the information are posted (post) online.
  • In a growing new trend, private details are being exposed (expose) in public, causing embarrassment for the individual concerned.
  • In one recent case where the attacks are continuing, tho theories are investigated (investigate).
    • The first is that the hacker is a member of a hacking group; the second is that the cyber-attacks are being carry outed (carry out) by an ex-employee.
    • The only certainty is that the organization involved needs to review its computer security before more damage are done (do).

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  • Sentence 1
    • Cyber-attacks on the increase Stories of cyber-attacks are being reported (report) in the media on a regular basis, but it seems very difficult to discover who is responsible for the attacks.
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  • Sentence 2
    • The procedure follows a pattern: the computer records of a large organization are hacked (hack), files are stealed (steal) and then some of the information are posted (post) online.
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    • The procedure follows a pattern: the computer records of a large organization are hacked (hack), files are steaoledn (steal) and then some of the information areis posted (post) online.
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  • Sentence 3
    • In a growing new trend, private details are being exposed (expose) in public, causing embarrassment for the individual concerned.
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  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • The first is that the hacker is a member of a hacking group; the second is that the cyber-attacks are being carry outed (carry out) by an ex-employee.
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    • The first is that the hacker is a member of a hacking group; the second is that the cyber-attacks are being carryied outed (carry out) by an ex-employee.
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