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  • Theater

    • The last week I went to a theater.
    • The play was "Spanish in Danemark", wtitten by Prosper Merime in the middle of nineteen's century.
    • The action in a scene was based on a true story, which happend in the remote Danish island at the time of Napoleon's reign.
    • That is amazing, that during a short time the author shows the historical events, the atmosphere in spanish and french armies, dreams and hopes of the main characters, as well as the spy intrigue and the pathetic love story.
    • It was a contemporary staging, with decorations in minimalistic style, the actor's playing was credible and scintillating.
    • The play was acted in a small auditurium with only few seating raws for spectators in front and along the edges of the stage - that added the sence of participation to the viewers.

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    • That is amazing, that during a short time the author shows the historical events, the atmosphere in spanish and french armies, dreams and hopes of the main characters, as well as the spy intrigue and the pathetic love story.
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    • ThaIt is amazing, that during, in such a short time, the author shows the historical events, the atmosphere in sthe Spanish and fFrench armies, the dreams and hopes of the main characters, as well as the spy intrigue and the pathetic love story.
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    • It was a contemporary staging, with decorations in minimalistic style, the actor's playing was credible and scintillating.
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    • It washad a contemporary staging, with decorations in minimalistic style, the actor's playminimalistic decorations; the acting was credible and scintillating.
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    • The play was acted in a small auditurium with only few seating raws for spectators in front and along the edges of the stage - that added the sence of participation to the viewers.
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    • The play was actperformed in a small audituorium with only a few seating rarows for spectators in front and along the edges of the stage - that added theis gave the viewers a greater sencse of participation to the viewers. ¶
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