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    • Gentrification: a positive or a negative process

    • Often initiates by political authorities, gentrification is a process which consists of increasing the average value of properties in a neighbourhood or a given area in order to boost businesses and commercial activities.
    • This process mainly benefits the wealthy classes, the land owners and the company directors.
    • It also contributes to the advent of positive phenomena such as economic impetus and employment growth.
    • However, the rise of the average value of properties could embroil the exodus of the working classes which would be bound to leave because of the rent swelling.
    • Hence, this phenomenon could enhance segregation and inequality.
    • By moving away from a flourishing economic area the working classes should be geographically disadvantage.
    • Moreover, gentrification is a process which is controversial and problematic to set up due to the resistance of the local residents who frequently refuses to desert their neighbourhood and abandon their local culture.

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    • Often initiates by political authorities, gentrification is a process which consists of increasing the average value of properties in a neighbourhood or a given area in order to boost businesses and commercial activities.
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    • OGentrification, often initiatesd by political authorities, gentrification is a process which consists ofgovernmental or other community (re)development entities, is the deliberate strategy of putting into action measures that will, presumably, result in increasing the averagemean value of properties in a neighbourhood or a given area in order to boost businesses, both private residential and/or commercial activities, within a specific community.
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    • Often initiatesd by political authorities, gentrification is a process which consists of increasinges the average value of properties in a neighbourhood or a given area in order to boost businesses and commercial activities.
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    • This process mainly benefits the wealthy classes, the land owners and the company directors.
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    • This process mainly benefits the wealthy classes, the chief beneficiaries of "gentrification" are private land owners and the company director/or public property owners and corporate entities.
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    • This process mainly benefits the wealthy classes, thefor example, land owners and the company directors.
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    • It also contributes to the advent of positive phenomena such as economic impetus and employment growth.
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    • It also contributes to the advent of positive phenomena such as economic impetus and employment growthGentrification might, but not necessarily, lead to economic stimulation and thus the growth of employment opportunities withing a community.
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    • It also contributes to the advenonset of positive phenomena such as economic impetus and employment growth.
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    • However, the rise of the average value of properties could embroil the exodus of the working classes which would be bound to leave because of the rent swelling.
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    • However, the rise of the average value of properties could embroil the exodus of the working classes which would be bound to leave because of the rent swellingincreasing mean value of property, both private and public, can also result in a "pricing out" affect, i.e., an increase in the average cost of housing that renders unaffordable, for many "working class" persons, housing within the increasingly "gentrified" community.
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    • However, the rise of the average value of properties could embroilcause the exodus of the working classes which would be bouno might be forced to leave because of thehigh rent swellings.
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    • By moving away from a flourishing economic area the working classes should be geographically disadvantage.
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    • By moving away from a flourishing economic area the working classes should beWorking-class persons, priced out and thus forced to leave the newly-flourishing community, find themselves at an economic and geographically disadvantage.
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    • Moreover, gentrification is a process which is controversial and problematic to set up due to the resistance of the local residents who frequently refuses to desert their neighbourhood and abandon their local culture.
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    • Moreover, gentrification is a process which is controversial and problematic to set up due to the resistance of the local residents who frequently refuses to desert their neighbourhood and abandon their local culture. ¶

      The process of community gentrification is controversial as it has the appearance of -- and indeed practices -- promoting, by means of a variety of legal and/or economic maneuvers, the removal/relocation of long-established residents of a community in order to (re)claim properties, again private and/or public, for the purpose of enhancing the perceived desirablity, and thus value, of space within a given community. ¶

      (Note: in The United States, "gentrification", which is driven mainly by governmental and business interests interested in pushing for the "economic rejuvenation" of a given community, is called "Urban Renewal".)¶
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    • Moreover, gentrification is a process which is controversial and problematic to set up dueowing to the resistance of the local residents who frequently refuses to desert their neighbourhood and abandon their local culture. ¶
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