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  • Some educational materials are very monotonous yet they have had tremendous success when they are published.
    • The reason behind the success is that in this era infamous people are on the top while people with true value are suppressed and considered they are doing tedious work.
    • It is hazardous to our society because many people who are studious and have a great potential to invest that energy in some subsequent value, would be oblivious to their surroundings and that is the reasons why many talented and vigorous kids fail.
    • There is no scarce material yet we are over abundant but there are a lot irrelevant and misleading materials that get people indifferent on the content they watch.
    • Trapped in that realm, people find it all trivial to watch and they get into sporadic habits in trying to push forward and at the end they just watch entertained shows or do something to numb this obligation which tend to improve them on something that could change their life.
    • Following that, they end up with rudimentary skills on which they are not satisfied and get derogatory on it.

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    • The reason behind the success is that in this era infamous people are on the top while people with true value are suppressed and considered they are doing tedious work.
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    • The reason behind the success is that in thise era infamous people are on the top, while people with true value are suppressed and considered they aro be doing tedious work.
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    • It is hazardous to our society because many people who are studious and have a great potential to invest that energy in some subsequent value, would be oblivious to their surroundings and that is the reasons why many talented and vigorous kids fail.
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    • It is hazardous to our society, because many people who are studious and have a great potential to invest thateir energy in some subsequent value, would be oblivious to their surroundings and that is the reasons why many talented and vigorous kids fail.
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    • There is no scarce material yet we are over abundant but there are a lot irrelevant and misleading materials that get people indifferent on the content they watch.
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    • There material is not scarce material yet, (on the contrary,) we are over abundant, but there are a lot irrelevant and misleading materials that get people indifferent ton the content they watch.
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    • Trapped in that realm, people find it all trivial to watch and they get into sporadic habits in trying to push forward and at the end they just watch entertained shows or do something to numb this obligation which tend to improve them on something that could change their life.
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    • Trapped in that realm, people find it all trivial to watch and they get into sporadic habits inof trying to push forward, and atin the end they just watch entertaineding shows or do something to numb thise obligation which tendhelps them to improve them onabout something that could change their life.
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