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    • Letter to a company for a job

    • Dear Ms Angela Hewitt, With a strong interest for the job position as a Strategic Marketing Analyst I am contacting you.
    • I would like to be informed about the range of salary and when would be the start.
    • In my last position, I was responsible in conducting marketing survey.
    • I am persuaded that this new challenge could be the next step of my career.
    • I am looking forward to your answer, Best regards, John Smith

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