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  • Working styles - Essay

  • In our career, they are two different working styles which can be considered.
  • On the one hand, we can work and stay in the same area, at the same office.
  • On the other hand, we can travel in different countries for many professional reasons.
  • In this essay, these two aspects will be considered.
    • After many years, we can gather experience about the strengths and the weak points of our work mates.
    • If we have known each other for a long time then we are more efficient as a team.
  • Secondly, the fact to work at the same location is convenient to found a family.
  • Later, while their children grow, they can enforce their friendships with other class mates.
  • However, discovering the world is a rich experience.
  • If we are for example a business corporate who must visit customers, lead projects in many countries.
  • We can enjoy different working styles among different cultures and languages.
  • This experience can be a great happiness if we do not need to care of a family whom we would miss.
  • In addition, the fact to meet people in different contexts can help to develop specific abilities.
  • Each work team has different strengths and weak points.
  • For example, in Italy, I could work in two different companies of software development in the area of Rome.
  • Both of them had different work styles and different work dynamics which gave them different strengths.
  • To conclude, I think that working at the same place during a long period or travelling around the word have both advantages and disadvantages in the professional domain and the social life.
  • I would recommend a life of business traveller four young adults who have not gotten married yet and a stable work style at the same site for people who must take care of their family.

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