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Text from OgnjenBanovic - English

    • Mental War Against Family and Environment

    • As a man who aims high in life, I've never been a type of person who wanted to live mediocre life.
  • Despite of my wishes, that life was so remote because my family attitude was unanimous to my environment which was stagnant and not moving at all towards something lucrative(neither business nor lifestyle) in life.Living that life for 20 years I became motivated and famished to achieve something significant and meaningful to myself so I started promptly to read any type of book that was related to business or self development which would increase my current skills, make me more savvy and boost my probable outcome I was expecting.
  • My life was so filthy and blend without any interesting people around that differ with character, everyone in my small town are idle or they are delinquent what I was avoiding all my life.
  • I felt so miserable in some period because I had been trying so much to change something that at the end didn't help.
  • My goal was to find sole purpose in life which could be long term happiness and not something what is fleeting with certain period of time.
  • At the end, from a reluctant man with „blurry“ future at the time, I have finally start to make some profit that makes things more motivating and optimistic.

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    • Despite of my wishes, that life was so remote because my family attitude was unanimous to my environment which was stagnant and not moving at all towards something lucrative(neither business nor lifestyle) in life.Living that life for 20 years I became motivated and famished to achieve something significant and meaningful to myself so I started promptly to read any type of book that was related to business or self development which would increase my current skills, make me more savvy and boost my probable outcome I was expecting.
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    • My life was so filthy and blend without any interesting people around that differ with character, everyone in my small town are idle or they are delinquent what I was avoiding all my life.
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    • My goal was to find sole purpose in life which could be long term happiness and not something what is fleeting with certain period of time.
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    • At the end, from a reluctant man with „blurry“ future at the time, I have finally start to make some profit that makes things more motivating and optimistic.
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