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    • Why there is crime....

  • In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
    • What are the main causes of crime?
    • How can we deal with those causes?
    • A number of crimes have been steadily growing in several nations.
    • There are some significant reasons which can impact on this issue.
    • In this essay, will discuss two important causes of this phenomenon and suggest the workable solutions to mitigate this problem.
    • There are two main reasons why some countries have crime problems.
    • Firstly, social Injustice can provide appropriate field to create offence in communities especially among poor groups of people.
    • Because in this attitude wealthy people are supported by governments and they are possessed of suitable education and employment opportunities while the people live in poverty are not able to provide livelihoods and to continue life so they tend to do crime such as pick-pocketing, armed robbery, drug dealing and so on.
    • Secondly, failure to perform of law not only can increase crime among needy but also among notable individuals.
    • There are, however, some practical solutions to help governments cope with this horrible phenomenon.
    • One step, education is a first and foremost method to manipulate this social anomaly.
    • Because more educated people would like to respect to the law rather than illiteracy people who do not access to the appropriate training.
    • Law is respected by many educated people rather than illiterate people.
    • For example; there are few crime maybe close to zero in the countries have high literacy rate such as Japan and Singapore.
    • Another viable alternative is to solve this issue relay on family.
    • Families should be familiar with educative correct process until they can bring up aware and reliable children.
    • Not only they can avoid the pitfalls of the criminal gangs, but also they do not effort to make insecure in communities.
    • In addition, when a youth is emotional supported by family he may does not have adequate appetency to do illegal actions.
    • To sum up; to accept this principle, prevention is more important than treatment , the people who govern countries must do proceedings to prevent the crime.
    • Moreover, choosing efficient methods can decline individual motivates to do commit felony.

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    • In this essay, will discuss two important causes of this phenomenon and suggest the workable solutions to mitigate this problem.
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    • In tThis essay, will discussexamine two important causes of this phenomenonincreasing crime and suggest the workable solutions that might serve to mitigate this problem.
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    • Firstly, social Injustice can provide appropriate field to create offence in communities especially among poor groups of people.
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    • Firstly,, a lack of social Injustice can provide appropriate field to create offence in communities especially among poor groups of peopl, rampant in low-income communities, provides incentive for crime.
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    • Because in this attitude wealthy people are supported by governments and they are possessed of suitable education and employment opportunities while the people live in poverty are not able to provide livelihoods and to continue life so they tend to do crime such as pick-pocketing, armed robbery, drug dealing and so on.
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    • Because in this attitude wealthy people are supported by governments and they are possessed of suitableIn contrast to the wealthy for whom educational and employment opportunities while the people live in poverty are not able to provide livelihoods abound, poorly educated, low-income persons, living a hand -to continue life so they tend to do crime such as pick-pocketing,-mouth existence by which they can barely support themselves by means of honest work, tend to turn to such crimes as theft, (sometimes armed) robbery, drug dealing and so on, etc., in order to support themselves.
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    • Secondly, failure to perform of law not only can increase crime among needy but also among notable individuals.
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    • Secondly,, the failure to perform of law not only can increase crime among needy but also among notable individualsof law enforcement results not merely in more crime among low-income individuals but among more prosperous members of society.
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    • There are, however, some practical solutions to help governments cope with this horrible phenomenon.
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    • There are, however, some practical solutions to help governments cope with this horrible phenomenHowever there exist a few practical solutions that can help authorities effectively address this deplorable situation.
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    • One step, education is a first and foremost method to manipulate this social anomaly.
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    • One step,Better education is a, first and foremost method to, is one of the meanipulate this social anomalys through which social ills can be addressed and conditions improved.
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    • Because more educated people would like to respect to the law rather than illiteracy people who do not access to the appropriate training.
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    • Because moretter educated people would like torsons tend to exhibit more respect tofor the law rather than illiteracy people who do not access to the appropriate training.authority of the law than so less-well educated persons.
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    • Law is respected by many educated people rather than illiterate people.
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    • LawIt is respected by many educated people rather than illiterate peopleasonable to assume that better-educated persons have a greater level of respect for legal authority and laws than less-well educated elements in society.
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    • For example; there are few crime maybe close to zero in the countries have high literacy rate such as Japan and Singapore.
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    • For example; there are few crime maybe close to zero in the countries haveThe rate of crime in more well-educated, highly literacy rate such as Japan and Singaporete, and prosperous countries, e.g., Japan and Singapore, is significantly lower than in many other nations.
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    • Families should be familiar with educative correct process until they can bring up aware and reliable children.
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    • Families should be familiar with educative correct process until they can bring upproper and effective educational processes so that they can raise children who are more aware and reliable children.
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    • Not only they can avoid the pitfalls of the criminal gangs, but also they do not effort to make insecure in communities.
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    • Not only they can avoid the pitfalls of the criminal gangs, but also they do not effort to make insecure in communitieIn this way their offspring will feel more secure within the framework of their community and thus less likely to see gang affiliations.
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    • In addition, when a youth is emotional supported by family he may does not have adequate appetency to do illegal actions.
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    • In addition, when a youth is emotional supported by family he may does not have adequate appetency to doA youth who is supported emotionally by his family will be less likely to engage in illegal actionvities.
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    • To sum up; to accept this principle, prevention is more important than treatment , the people who govern countries must do proceedings to prevent the crime.
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    • To sum up; to acceptIn conclusion, this principle, suggests that prevention is more important than treatment , the people who govern countries must do proceedings to prevent the crimeand that government should invest more in those elements which will help prevent persons' inclinations to rely on crime as a means of self support.
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    • Moreover, choosing efficient methods can decline individual motivates to do commit felony.
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    • MoBy investing in methods that will foster preover, choosing efficient methods can decline individual motivates to do commit felony. ¶
      ntion, society can effectively reduce the factors that motivate individuals to resort to crime as a viable means of supporting themselves.
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