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- I introduce myself!
- Hi guys !
- My name is Nicoas and I happy to leaning English with you, all above we have the best teacher in french country ;) Today, I have been living in Pyla nearby The Dune of pyla for 4 years ago.
- Do you know the Dune of pyla ?
Unfortunately the coming years we will go to live in Paris due to my job.
- I hop to improve my English in this formation beacause Paris is not far to Paris!
- Nice a have day !

nicolas_zaOctober 2019Bầu chọn ngay!
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- I introduce myself!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I should/would introduce myself!
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- Hi guys !
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Hi ,guys !
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- My name is Nicoas and I happy to leaning English with you, all above we have the best teacher in french country ;) Today, I have been living in Pyla nearby The Dune of pyla for 4 years ago.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My name is Nicoas and I am happy to learn~~ing~~ English with you, all above and we have the best teacher in french country ;)¶
  Today,France ;)¶
  Today will be 4 years since I have been living in Pyla, nearby The Dune of pPyla ~~for 4 years ago~~.
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- My name is Nicoas and I happy to leaning English with you, all above we have the best teacher in french country ;)¶
  Today, I have been living in Pyla nearby The Dune of pylaSince - the starting point in time of the action.¶
  I have been living in London since 2010.¶
  For - the amount of time since the event /action started.¶
  I have been living in London for 4 9 years ~~ago~~.
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- Do you know the Dune of pyla ?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Do you know the Dune of pPyla ?
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- Unfortunately the coming years we will go to live in Paris due to my job.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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- I hop to improve my English in this formation beacause Paris is not far to Paris!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I hope to improve my English in this formation beacause Paris is not far to Paris!
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- Nice a have day !
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~Nic~~Have a ~~hav~~nice day ! ¶
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