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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par Maryam1987 - English

  • teenagers and older people

    • There are always complex relationships between adolescents and their adults in all eras.
    • In some people's opinion, youngsters should pursue their older.
    • In other people's opinion, itis normal for youngsters to disobey their older.
    • There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on the matter.
  • To begin with, a number of people hold the view that, adolescents as the same as other humans are social creatures so they require appropriate guidance from experienced and reliable people especially from parents.
  • Older people are a significant resource of knowledge and wisdom.
    • Because they had been difficult situations during their lives so they could take more experience.
  • They have an insight about some subjects which can be ignored readily by younger people.
    • Such as, take care of children, recognize truthful friends, finding applicable methods to solve novel problems.
    • In contrast, some people hold the opinion that teenagers have natural rights to be the freedom to make decisions for their own lives and choose a unique path for their lives.
    • This especially way should be different than other people even their parents.
  • They need to have adequate to do trials and errors to achieve independence and building applicable personalities and behaviors for themselves.
  • For instance: well-known and influential characters such as social and political leaders, scientists, athletes, and artists throughout history most of the time have not accepted the outdated stereotype ideas so they have tried to be ambitious.
  • Therefore, not only they have been curious but also they have been brave to chase their viewpoints.
  • To sum up, I personally hold the view that, both perspectives hold equal significance.
  • As good as teenagers use their parent's advice and experience they can make independent decisions to achieve mature and to become responsible individuals in the future. 

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