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  • IELTS writing test

  • Nowadays more people are living by themselves.
  • What are the reasons for this?
    • Will this have a negative or positive impact on the society?
  • Nowadays the number of people living alone has skyrocketed.
  • This is because today we marry later than in the past, we divorce and stay single for years.
    • Young adults between 18 and 34 who lives alone are than 5 millions, compared with 500, 000 in 1950.
    • In my opinion this will have a negative impact on the society.
  • In fact human societies have organised themselves around the will to live with others, not alone.
  • So this is a sign of fragmentation.
  • Sometimes we feel lonely, anxious and uncertain about whether we would be happier in another arrangement.

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