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    • Eating Healthy

    • In the last months, I've come across a myriad of people who were not aware of how our eating habits influence our everyday performance.
    • Eating well is of particular significance for aspects of life such as mood, amount and quality of sleep, productivity, energy, healthy skin, and so forth.
    • Therefore, I decided to do some research and spread the word with some of the conclusions which I arrived to.
    • Above all, it is particularly important that we have a plant-based diet.
    • Primarily bovine meat does not provide a substantial amount of nutrients such as protein neither fibre.
    • Therefore, the high consumption of beef brings more disadvantages than benefits.
    • What is more, I found out that the ingest of industrial milk is as well unhealthy since the milk that generally reaches out our fridges has been homogenised (a process that adds air to the substance), and through pasteurisation, all the enzymatic content is killed.
    • Consequently, most parts of the nutrients are damaged.
    • Oxidised fat it what is left.
    • Accordingly, it is crucial to eat the highest amount of raw food as possible, as well as to choose from organic produce.
    • Drinking at least two litters of good water a day, reducing the amount of sodium and processed sugar it is also vital.
    • Eating well might result in an improvement of your gut's health hence a balance of your circadian cycles, appearance of your skin, and you will soon find a boost in energy levels.

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    • Eating Healthy
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    • Eating Healthy

      note - while your title, "Eating Healthy", is grammatically and conceptually acceptable, a better to express this might be "Eating to stay healthy", "A Nutrition Diet". But "eating Healthy" is okay and would be understandable to any literate English-knowing person.
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    • In the last months, I've come across a myriad of people who were not aware of how our eating habits influence our everyday performance.
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    • InDuring the lpast few months, I've come across aencountered myriad of people who weare unot aware of how outheir eating habits influence our everydatheir daily performance.
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    • Eating well is of particular significance for aspects of life such as mood, amount and quality of sleep, productivity, energy, healthy skin, and so forth.
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    • Eating well is of particular significance for aspects of life suchA nutritionally sound diet plan is of particular importance with respect to such elements as mood, amount and quality of sleep, productivity, energy, and healthy skin, and so forth.
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    • Therefore, I decided to do some research and spread the word with some of the conclusions which I arrived to.
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    • Therefore, I decided to do some research and spread the word(the concepts) with some of the conclusions which I arrived to.
    • Therefore, I decided to do some research and spread the word with some of the conclusions which I arrived toI thus decided to investigate this topic and and share with others some of my findings of my research.
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    • Above all, it is particularly important that we have a plant-based diet.
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    • Above all, it is particularly important that we have a plant-based die else, my research suggests that adhering to a plant-based diet plan is particularly important.
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    • Primarily bovine meat does not provide a substantial amount of nutrients such as protein neither fibre.
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    • Primarily the bovine meat does not provide a substantial amount of nutrients such as protein neither fibre.
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    • Primarily bovine meat does not provide a substantial amount of nutrients such as protein neither fibreWhile a dietary plan comprised mainly of meat, e.g., beef, is rich in proteins, it is the source of a substantial amount of saturated fats and contains almost no fiber.¶

      note: this assertion is @ least 50% incorrect; a meat -- and especially "bovine" sourced -- diet is in fact particularly RICH in protein. Low in fiber, true. High in saturated fats, also true. But HIGH in several types of amino acids, i.e., proteins
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    • Therefore, the high consumption of beef brings more disadvantages than benefits.
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    • Therefore, the high consumption of beef bringIn my opinion, a dietary regimen featuring the consumption of large quantities of beef has more disadvantages than benefits.
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    • What is more, I found out that the ingest of industrial milk is as well unhealthy since the milk that generally reaches out our fridges has been homogenised (a process that adds air to the substance), and through pasteurisation, all the enzymatic content is killed.
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    • What is more, I found out that the ingest of industrial milk is as well unhealthy since the milk that generally reaches outarrives our fridges has been homogenised (a process that adds air to the substance), and through pasteurisation, all the enzymatic content is killed.
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    • Accordingly, it is crucial to eat the highest amount of raw food as possible, as well as to choose from organic produce.
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    • Accordingly, it is crucial to eat the highest amount of raw food as possible, as well always to choose from organic produce.
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    • AIn accordance with these findinglys, it is crucial to eat the highest amount ofmportant to one's health to consume as much raw food as possible, as well as to choose fromnd to partake, if and whenever possible, of organic produce.
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    • Drinking at least two litters of good water a day, reducing the amount of sodium and processed sugar it is also vital.
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    • Drinking at least two litters of good water a day,To reducinge the amount of sodium and processed sugar it is alsn one's body, it is very important to drink at least two vlitalers of water every day.
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    • Eating well might result in an improvement of your gut's health hence a balance of your circadian cycles, appearance of your skin, and you will soon find a boost in energy levels.
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    • Eating well might result in an improvement of your gut's health hence a balance of your circadian cycles, a good appearance of your skin, and you will soon find a boost in your energy levels.
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