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    • Call for applications post-doc

    • Dear Professor, Through the professional social network -LinkedIn- I got your coordinates.
    • I introduce myself, I am Samir El ghayam.
    • I live in Dakar, Senegal and I have a Ph.D. obtained at the .....
    • University of Dakar in Senegal.
    • My research topic was ....
    • I am now a postdoctoral researcher in this same school since February 2019, and the duration of my contract is one year.
    • In the event that my work could actually be the subject of a post-doctoral project, I am particularly interested.
    • The prospect of gaining professional experience abroad motivates me very sincerely, because I am convinced that this experience will be highly beneficial and stimulating for my research work.
    • Receive, Professor, my respectful greetings,

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    • Dear Professor, Through the professional social network -LinkedIn- I got your coordinates.
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    • Dear Professor,¶

      Through the professionalI got your contact information through the social network -LinkedIn- I got your coordinates.
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    • I live in Dakar, Senegal and I have a Ph.D. obtained at the .....
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    • I live in Dakar, Senegal and. I haveold a Ph.D. obtainedin [note: you should enter here the discipline/field to which your doctorate applies]. I earned my doctorate at the .....
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    • I am now a postdoctoral researcher in this same school since February 2019, and the duration of my contract is one year.
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    • I am nowhave worked as the University of Dakar as a postdoctoral researcher in this same school since February 2019, and t. The duration of my contract is one year.
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    • In the event that my work could actually be the subject of a post-doctoral project, I am particularly interested.
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    • In the event that my am interested in finding out if my present research work could actually be the subject of a post-doctoral project, I am particularly interested.
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    • The prospect of gaining professional experience abroad motivates me very sincerely, because I am convinced that this experience will be highly beneficial and stimulating for my research work.
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    • The prospect ofI am keenly interested in gaining professional experience abroad motivates me very sincerely, because I am convinced that thissuch an experience willould be highly beneficial to and stimulating for my research work.
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