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    • Hey my friends, I just get enrolled today, so I would like to begin with writing a paragraph, in order to see your feedbacks about my English.
    • I still haven't understood some details about the sevices in this site, as well I need some fellas here to help me get better with my language skills, and With my appreciation to all of you .

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