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hi!
Hi!
I'm Laura and I live in Italy.
I'm fourteen years old.
Who want to learn Italian?
I want to improve my English because I think this Language nice and useful in the life.
I'm speak also don't well good German and sometimes I confuse with it ...

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句子 1
- Hi!
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- I'm Laura and I live in Italy.
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- I'm fourteen years old.
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句子 4
- Who want to learn Italian?
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- I want to improve my English because I think this Language nice and useful in the life.
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- I'm speak also don't well good German and sometimes I confuse with it ...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6