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Tekst fra YULIAFROLOVA - English

  • About my day and a book by Leo Tolstoy

    • Some days ago I’ve decided to improve my English and do something for it.
    • I sent to the random people this message (below), but I did get no answer.
    • So It’s very good that I’ve remembered this site) Hi!) I’m Yulia, from Russia.
    • I have been learning English for ages but I can’t speak English fluently because of an absence of speaking practice.
    • I ask random people to do a good, kind deed (I have a small request to you).
    • If it’s not difficult to you, please fix my grammar (or semantic) mistakes in this message and send to me back the correct version of my message) You would help me so much!) So.
    • I just tell you something about my last few days (I swear, I won’t bother you anymore)).
  • I love reading very much.
    • Recently I started reading a novel “The Kreutzer Sonata” by Leo Tolstoy.
  • The first few chapters of this book tell about a man who killed his wife.
    • He goes by train and tells a story of his life to a fellow passenger.
    • He analyzes a lot about the attitude of the men to the women.
  • He resents the injustice of the laws that were made by men for women.
    • Men can do all that they want, but women must be obedient and meek...
    • He reflects about the importance of love between married couples.
    • There was no love in his family and this fact led to the fatal consequences. So.
    • I won’t tell you what happened next so as not to spoiler (in case if you will want to read)..and I haven’t read further yet) Have a good day!
    • ???? Thank you for your help)

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English