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  • Personal choice

    • Have you had any idea which country is the most vegetarian? That's India.
    • But most people are vegetarian not because of their convictions, but because they can't afford meat.
    • So over then 40 % of this country is vegeterian.
  • In my country things are different.
    • Most people positive about the idea of vegetarianism, but just 4% really follow it.
    • I'd like to try, so I don't eat meat (it wasn't difficult to refuce), but still eat fish (it's more difficult).
    • My goal is be a vegeterian not less then a year, afterwads to decide what I really want.
    • I don't approve that war between meat eaters and plant eaters, since I'm convinced this is personal choice of everyone.

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    • I'd like to try, so I don't eat meat (it wasn't difficult to refuce), but still eat fish (it's more difficult).
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    • I'd like to try, so I don't eat meat (it wasn'tis difficult to refucse), but still eat fish (it's more difficult).
    • I'd like to try vegetarianism, so I don't eat meat (it wasn't difficult to refucestop), but still eat fish (it's more difficult).
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    • My goal is be a vegeterian not less then a year, afterwads to decide what I really want.
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    • My goal is to be a vegeterian inot less thean a year, afterwads toI’ll decide what I really want.
    • My goal is be a vegetearian not less thenfor at least a year, a. Afterwards to, I'll decide what I really want.
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    • I don't approve that war between meat eaters and plant eaters, since I'm convinced this is personal choice of everyone.
      투표하세요!
    • I don't approvesupport thate war between the meat eaters and the plant eaters, since I'm convinced that vegetarianism is personal choice of everyone.
    • I don't approve that war between meat eaters and plant eaters, since I'm convinced this is personal choice of everyoneSome just can't follow this idea because of their predatory nature, like this nice pretending bear.
    • I don't approve thatof the war between meat eaters and plant eaters, since I'm convinced this isit's a personal choice of everyone.
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