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    • 13-days in summer Baikal travel

  • Have you ever wanted to visit Siberia jungle?
  • Have you always dreamed to see the purest waters of Baikal, to visit sacred places of power of shamans and to try traditional buryat meals?
  • If you haven’t lived your dream holiday yet, here’s your chance to do all these things and more!
  • Baikal, Olkhon Island, Eastern Sayan Mountains, Khamar-Daban Accommodation: Stay in comfortable double rooms and spend one day in camp near to Taljinsky peak.
  • Activities: walking, swimming, mushroom picking Places: visit to the village of Arshan, climb to the Peak of Love with a height of 2100 meters, walk to the Warm Lakes: Emerald, Fairy Tale and Warm and ride to Khamar-Daban, namely to the Talzhinsky Peak.
  • Cultural program: visit to Architectural and Ethnographic Museum Taltsy, Baikal Museum in Listvyanka and Irkutsk Nerpinary.
  • Other activates: dinners in buryat restrain, try traditional meals – buuzy, buy souvenirs: authentic things and herbs.
  • Participate in a master class on one of the folk crafts.
  • Total cost: 60000r Price include: hotel, meals and tour and transport costs.

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      Have you always dreamed of seeing the purest waters of Lake Baikal, visiting the sacred places where shamans wield power, or to try traditional Buryat meals?¶
      If you haven’t lived your dream holiday yet, here’s your chance to do all these things and more!¶
      Accommodations at Baikal, Olkhon Island, Eastern Sayan Mountains, and/or Khamar-Daban: Stay in comfortable double rooms and spend one day in camp near Talzhinsky Peak.¶
      Activities: Walking, swimming, mushroom picking ¶
      Places: Visit the village of Arshan; climb to the summit of The Peak of Love (2100 meters); walk to the Warm Lakes, i.e., Emerald, Fairy Tale and Warm; and ride to Khamar-Daban and visit Talzhinsky Peak.¶
      Cultural activities: Visit the Architectural and Ethnographic Museum in Taltsy; the Baikal Museum in Listvyanka; and the Irkutsk Nerpinary.¶
      Other activates: dine in Buryat style by trying such traditional dishes as buuzy; buy souvenirs and herbs; participate in a "folk arts & crafts" master class.¶
      Total cost: 60,000 rubles, including hotel, meals, tour, and transportation.
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