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  • May 13th.

    • Today the weather was be crazy, 'cause, at eight o'clock was raining, at nine o'clock was sunny, at twelve o'clock was raining, at one o'clock was sunny.
    • Well today has class at six o'clock, then I do the homework, I made the dinner because I just wanna dinner when arrive at home, took a shower and I wore, after, I was walking at the university with a sunny day, to blocks beyond started to raining very hard, I live four blocks at the university, I arrived at university wet complely.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Today the weather was be crazy, 'cause, at eight o'clock was raining, at nine o'clock was sunny, at twelve o'clock was raining, at one o'clock was sunny.
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    • Today, the weather was being crazy, ' because, at eight o'clock it was raining, atby nine o'clock it was sunny, at twelve o'clock was raining, again then at one o'clock it was sunny.
    • Today the weather was be crazy, 'because, at eight o'clock it was raining, at nineeight o'clock was, sunny, at twelve o'clock was raining, at one o'clock was sunnynine, raining again at noon, and sunny again at one in the afternoon.
    • Today the's weather was be crazy, 'cause,: at eight o'clock it was raining,; at nine o'clock it was sunny, at twelve o'clock it was raining, again; and at one o'clock wasit was again sunny.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Well today has class at six o'clock, then I do the homework, I made the dinner because I just wanna dinner when arrive at home, took a shower and I wore, after, I was walking at the university with a sunny day, to blocks beyond started to raining very hard, I live four blocks at the university, I arrived at university wet complely.
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    • Well today has, I have a class at six o'clock, then I do the. So, I did my homework, Iand made the dinner because I just wannaimmediately want to have dinner when arrive atI reach home,. I took a shower and I wore, after, I was, got dressed, and started walking ato the university with a sunny day, to blocks beyond. It was sunny, and I live for blocks from my University, but it started to raining very hard, I live four blocks at the university, after just two blocks of walking. I arrived at the university wet completely. wet!
    • WellSo today I hasd class at six o'clock, then I do the homework, I made the dinner because I just wanna dinner when arrive at home, took a shower and I wore, after, after which I'll finished my homework, then made dinner, and then took a shower. When I was walking ato the university with a was sunny day, to, but after walking only a couple of blocks beyondit started to raining very hard,. I live four blocks atfrom the university, so when I arrived at university wet complelythere I was soaking wet.
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