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Text from 55elena_jv - English

  • The poor sparrow

    • In my childhood I dreamed about a pet, but my mum was against.
    • Then I tried to catch a bird, but my attempts were useless.
    • So my father decided to help me, he catch a sparrow for me.
    • While the bird was in a cage on a street, a cat tried to get and scratched it.
    • Mum intented to help and treated the wound with zelenka (popular antiseptic in Russia), but the sparrow died.
    • I've never catch a bird anymore and I'm regret for that poor sparrow.
    • Sometimes it's so difficult for us to understand that animals happier without us.
    • Now I think that only who are born in captivity can be happy with people.

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