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  • How Does It Feel

    • How it is bad is that feeling when you want to speak out but you can not, Have you ever fallen in a lake of mud and you tried hard to stand up but what you did is just another fall again and again , and then you got deeper and now the mud tightens around your body and you could not breathe easily, making a flame inside you.
    • I am just trying to explain my feeling after the English class :(

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    • How it is bad is that feeling when you want to speak out but you can not, Have you ever fallen in a lake of mud and you tried hard to stand up but what you did is just another fall again and again , and then you got deeper and now the mud tightens around your body and you could not breathe easily, making a flame inside you.
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    • How it is bad is that feeling when you want to speak out but you can not,? Have you ever fallen into a lake of mudmuddy lake and you tried really hard to stand up, but what you did is just another fallyou just fell over again and again , and then you got deeper and now the mud tightensed around your body and you could not breathe easily, making a flame inside you.
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