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    • Gallipoli has become an important part of Australian’s history and it is celebrated broadly around Australia in every April.
  • Australians have a concise history when it comes to wars and national defense, which might have affected the importance of Gallipoli.
  • I think almost every country has several bloody wars in their history and those wars have admittedly strengthened their national identity.
    • Even though the Gallipoli was not so devastating, it offers the place to express the feelings which are due to war and its victims and losses.
    • Probably, one factor which also makes Gallipoli so popular is careful marketing made by media.

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