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Text from christie_c - English

    • Can you read my poem ?

    • The day before yesterday, I left my boyfriend and I’m lying on the floor and I’m singing my joy.
    • Because he isn’t there, because he smoked all the time and he stole my TV, guy !
  • I disagree with you on that.
  • And you, do you see what I mean ?
  • You can go beyond, you can go if you try.
  • All the things you should give up.
    • It’s worse than that you think .

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English