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  • space and exchange

  • We will talk about space and exchange, and in this notion, the united states integrate perfectly.
  • Indeed, North America has been able to take advantage of slavery and mainly racial inequalities linked to previous migrations are still at the heart of the news today.
  • We could ask ourselves, what have been the evolutions of inequalities in the usa and what contributed to it?
  • At first we will talk about the law and the impact of politics.
  • And in a second time, claims made through art.
  • According to an audio document studied in class, we worked on a speech pronounced by the American President Barack Obama, on the 15 June 2012, at the white house, about the politics of immigration.
  • A speech in which he says that he is in favor of the project of law called "dream act ».
  • Until nowadays, in the USA, the children of immigrants, who arrived very young on American soil, grew up in this country, adopted their values, and began their studies in American schools.
  • they are Americans of heart and mind, but it is only when they applying for a job or for a graduate scholarship, or applying for a driver's license that they learn that they are illegal immigrant.
  • They grew without identity paper.
  • As the first black president, this act is memorable, he binds his convictions and his experience to justice, and to the laws of his country.
  • He asks his people to open their eyes and to be able to put themselves in the place of these young people, to who we stole their identity when they become adults.
  • To whom one withdraws a part of their life, which prevents them from reaching suddenly their objectives.
  • He asks for compassion for these young people who have done everything in the rules of the art, who have worked hard, all this to find themselves facing a possible deportation to a country of which they know nothing and of which they don’t even speak the language.
  • This speech is then a great step in the history of the USA, it echoes the first laws after apartheid, which allow people of black colors to settle in neighborhoods, at the origine reserved to wasp.
  • The wasp is the white Anglosaxon Protestant.
  • The radical ideology of these movements WASP advocates the supremacy of the white race and develops xenophobic theories.
  • One artist in particular, Norman Rockwell has used his art to defend, denounce or archive important facts of the history.

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    • Indeed, North America has been able to take advantage of slavery and mainly racial inequalities linked to previous migrations are still at the heart of the news today.
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    • According to an audio document studied in class, we worked on a speech pronounced by the American President Barack Obama, on the 15 June 2012, at the white house, about the politics of immigration.
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    • Until nowadays, in the USA, the children of immigrants, who arrived very young on American soil, grew up in this country, adopted their values, and began their studies in American schools.
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    • they are Americans of heart and mind, but it is only when they applying for a job or for a graduate scholarship, or applying for a driver's license that they learn that they are illegal immigrant.
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    • As the first black president, this act is memorable, he binds his convictions and his experience to justice, and to the laws of his country.
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    • He asks his people to open their eyes and to be able to put themselves in the place of these young people, to who we stole their identity when they become adults.
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    • He asks for compassion for these young people who have done everything in the rules of the art, who have worked hard, all this to find themselves facing a possible deportation to a country of which they know nothing and of which they don’t even speak the language.
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    • This speech is then a great step in the history of the USA, it echoes the first laws after apartheid, which allow people of black colors to settle in neighborhoods, at the origine reserved to wasp.
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