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  • Power in the 1960s

    • Power can be defined as the ability to exert influence and have control over the behavior of other people.
    • Power exist not only through the government, who implements laws and standards to which the population should comply to, but also through the movements contesting the latter, such as the civil rights and hippies movement.
    • Power is therefore embodied not only by the White house, but by powerful speeches delivered by influential figures, by cinema or by protest songs.
    • From its outset, power was established after an agreement of the people willing to co-opt a charismatic leader capable of bringing improvement to their lives.
    • However, sporadic disagreements between the authority and groups of population has led to movements subverting existing standards.
    • In America of the 1960s, the turmoil reached its acme.
    • The outbreak of the Vietnam war and the exacerbation of racial discrimination instigated the effervescent new generation to spring into action.
    • In other words, America was torn apart by a strife of governmental power and the emerging counter-power trying either to offset, or to firmly oppose the decision of the government.
    • Therefore, powerful figures seems to be generating social unrest, conversely to its original duty to improve the people's lives.

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    • Power exist not only through the government, who implements laws and standards to which the population should comply to, but also through the movements contesting the latter, such as the civil rights and hippies movement.
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    • Power exist not only through thein governments, who implements laws and standards towith which thea population shouldis expected to comply to, but also through the movements contesting the latter, such as the civil rights and hippies movementactions exerted by certain social "movements", e.g., groups engaged in civil rights and anti-war demonstrations.
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    • Power is therefore embodied not only by the White house, but by powerful speeches delivered by influential figures, by cinema or by protest songs.
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    • PThus power is therefore embodied not only by t"The White hHouse", but by powerful speeches delivered by influential figures, by cinema or by protestthrough the words expressed by influential figures, through the cinema, and even through songs.
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    • From its outset, power was established after an agreement of the people willing to co-opt a charismatic leader capable of bringing improvement to their lives.
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    • From itsthe outset, power was established afterthrough an agreement, of the people willing to co-opt ar "social contract", established between the greater community (i.e., "the people"), and an appointed, charismatic leader capable of securing and bringing about improvement(s) to their lives.
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    • However, sporadic disagreements between the authority and groups of population has led to movements subverting existing standards.
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    • However, sporadicOn occasion disagreements between "the authorityies" and groups of"the general population" has led to movements subverting existing standardsgiven rise to social movements intent on subverting the status quo.
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    • The outbreak of the Vietnam war and the exacerbation of racial discrimination instigated the effervescent new generation to spring into action.
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    • The outbreak of thewar in Vietnam war and the exacerbationpersistence of racial discrimination instigated the effervescent newwere among the issues that inspired the younger generation to spring intotake action.
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    • In other words, America was torn apart by a strife of governmental power and the emerging counter-power trying either to offset, or to firmly oppose the decision of the government.
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    • In other words, America was torn apart by athe strife ofuggle that developed between governmental power and the emerging counter-power trying either to offset, or to firmly oppose the decision of theculture which was committed to demonstrations of opposition to government policies.
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    • Therefore, powerful figures seems to be generating social unrest, conversely to its original duty to improve the people's lives.
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    • Therefore, powerful figures seems to be generating social unrest, conversely to its original dutyAs a result, the halls of power, i.e., government, contrary to its original function of helping to improve the people's lives, seemed more focused, intentionally or otherwise, on generating social unrest.
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