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  • aunt

  • I had a beautiful aunt smiling in the face of others was always in my heart and mind, I will not forget that day when we lost, on September 09, last year, in the meantime I was with her was pregnant with her child, but the bleeding did not leave it okay, we went to the hospital , But the doctors could not save them and save the small ones, I would never forget that day

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    • I had a beautiful aunt smiling in the face of others was always in my heart and mind, I will not forget that day when we lost, on September 09, last year, in the meantime I was with her was pregnant with her child, but the bleeding did not leave it okay, we went to the hospital , But the doctors could not save them and save the small ones, I would never forget that day
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