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Text from slnshk - English

 
    • Seventh day

    • I would like to advice everyone, who can’t to win a fight with his fears: believe in yourself and every day do something that zoom you to success.
    • Need to priorities, love your occupation and keep patience.
    • If you don’t see a progress after ten steps, you necessarily see it when you will pass the first kilometre your way.
    • A progress is directly proportional to spent time and force.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • I would like to advice everyone, who can’t to win a fight with his fears: believe in yourself and every day do something that zoom you to success.
    • I would like to advice everyone, who can’t to win a fight withdesires to conquer his fears: believe in yourself and every day do something that zoompropels you to success.
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    • I would like to adviceMy advice to everyone, who can’t to't win a fight with histheir fears: b Believe in yourself and every day do something that zoom you to succesevery day to get you closer to your goals.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I would like to advice everyone,give some advice to all those who can’t to win a fightstruggle with histheir fears: believe in yourself and every day do something that zboomsts you to succesyour achievements.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Need to priorities, love your occupation and keep patience.
    • Need toHave priorities, love your occupation and keepbe patiencet.
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    • Need toHave priorities, love your occupationwhat you do, and keepbe patiencet.
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    • Need toSet your priorities, love your occupationwhat you do and keepbe patiencet.
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  • Sentence 3
    • If you don’t see a progress after ten steps, you necessarily see it when you will pass the first kilometre your way.
    • If you don’t see a progress after ten steps, you necessariprobably see it when you will passafter the first kilometre on your way.
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    • If you don’t see a progress after ten steps, you necessari'll probably see it when you will pass the'll take your first kmilometre your wayestone.
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  • Sentence 4
    • A progress is directly proportional to spent time and force.
    • A pProgress is directly proportional to spentthe time and forceinvested in your pursuits and your effort to succeed. Therefore, don't give up, don't give in, keep forging ahead.
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    • A pProgress is directly proportional to spent time and efforcet spent.
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    • A pProgress is directly proportional to spentthe time and forcespent on your efforts.
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