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Text from Maryam1987 - English

  • Would you please correct my text?

    • The inequality between rich nations and poor nations are wider more than before.
    • Writining your opinions about this topic?
    • Although humans live in the same world, we observe that there is great inequality between rich and poor countries.
    • Unfortunately, this gap is getting bigger more than before.
    • This issue might be had different reasons, but everyone knows that it can be solved if governments try to find good solutions for it.
    • First of all, education is played the main role to improve countries, but we see there are not enough encourage for sending students to schools in the most countryside areas of poor countries.
    • Also, there are not suitable facilities in their universities and they do not access of high standard education.
    • Therefore educated people to find a good job they have to move to developed countries, so this happens help rich nations are getting rich and poor nations are getting poor.
    • After that, poor countries are dealing with poverty because there is not strict and exact economy laws in these countries so they have plenty of corruption in politics and economy.
    • In this situation, a few people easily abuse laws so they are able to make a lot of money for themselves but other people should live in the poverty condition because corruption has been able to increase the unemployment rate.
    • To reduce this gap, governments need suitable strategies.
    • Firstly; free education provides for every person without pay attention they live in cities or in villages.
    • If educated people understand governments provide standard education and jobs for people and respect for their ideas they won't leave their countries.
    • Secondly, governments have to impose strict laws against corruption because law can be punished offenders.
    • In the end, the first world countries should be supported them by sending communal and training facilities and teaching them how they can use them.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 5
    • This issue might be had different reasons, but everyone knows that it can be solved if governments try to find good solutions for it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This issue might be had different reasonsDifferent reasons are causing this problem, but everyone knows that it can be solved if governments try to find goofind solutions for it.
    • This issue might be had different reasonis caused by multiple factors, but everyone knows that it can be solved if governments try to find goodeffective solutions for it.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • First of all, education is played the main role to improve countries, but we see there are not enough encourage for sending students to schools in the most countryside areas of poor countries.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • First of all, education is playeding the main role to improvein prestige of countries, but we see that there are not enough encourageresources for sending students to schools in the most of the countryside areas of poor countries.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Therefore educated people to find a good job they have to move to developed countries, so this happens help rich nations are getting rich and poor nations are getting poor.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Therefore educated people to find a good job they haveneed to move to developed countries, so this to find a good job, the way it happens helpmakes rich nations arecountries getting richer and poor nationcountries are getting more poor.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • After that, poor countries are dealing with poverty because there is not strict and exact economy laws in these countries so they have plenty of corruption in politics and economy.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • After that, pPoor countries are dealing with poverty because there isare not strict and exact economy laws in these countries, so they have plenty of corruption in politics and economy.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • In this situation, a few people easily abuse laws so they are able to make a lot of money for themselves but other people should live in the poverty condition because corruption has been able to increase the unemployment rate.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In this situation, a few people easily abuse laws so they areto make them able to make a lot of money for themselves, but other people shouldhave to live in the poverty condition of poverty, because the corruption has been able to increase thean unemployment rate.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
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  • Frazo 12
    • Firstly; free education provides for every person without pay attention they live in cities or in villages.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Firstly; they need to provide a free education provides for every person without paying attention they live in cities or inon person's place of living, whether it's city or villages.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • If educated people understand governments provide standard education and jobs for people and respect for their ideas they won't leave their countries.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • If educated people understand governments provide standard education and jobs for people and respect for their ideas they won't leave their countries. Meaning?
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
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  • Frazo 15
    • In the end, the first world countries should be supported them by sending communal and training facilities and teaching them how they can use them.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In the end, the first world countries should be supported them by sending communal and training facilities and teaching them how they cano use ithem.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15