Korekty

Text from Maryam1987 - English

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    • Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. what do you think about it?
    • Many governments have tried to have good action in their economic all around the world.
    • Governments think that economic directly contact people life and if governments want to improve their politics and take power they should be successful in their economic.
    • But some people have other idea; they believe that, there are other significant items in the society such as, education, security, political stability, social values so governments should attend them.
    • I personally believe that the economic is a necessary option to success and improve but it is not more important than other items.
    • Governments think that economic progresses is the key to success because they are able to make new job opportunities for young people so this happen can improve citizen's life standard and decrease crime.
    • Also developed countries do not have problems as same as developing and underdeveloped countries.
    • Because people do not financial problems so they have free time for spending with their families, going to travel, doing exercise, eating enough and healthy foods and exc.
    • But some people think that even though economic have solved some of people problems especially to delete poverty and improve their life style but it alone is not able to solve other people issues because humans are social and live creations so they have different needs and wishes.
    • For instance; if governments did not pay attention to education as same as economic, countries would not train honest and goodhearted experts so they will find many big social problems in the future.
    • In conclusion, I believe that, human society requires happy and bighearted humans than economical humans.
    • Although economic plays an important role to develop a nation but it is not enough.
    • Because economic, education, security, political stability, social values all of them connect to each other so governments should pay attention all of them unless after some if governments do not attend them they will have huge troubles such as increase crime rate, corruption, divorce and other problems in the future.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
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    • Governments think that economic directly contact people life and if governments want to improve their politics and take power they should be successful in their economic.
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    • Governments think that economicy is directly contacting people’s lifeves, and if governments want to improve their politics and take power, they should be successful in their economic.y.
    • Governments think that economicy is directly contacts people life and if governments want to improve their politics and take power they should be successful in their economicy.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • But some people have other idea; they believe that, there are other significant items in the society such as, education, security, political stability, social values so governments should attend them.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • But sSome people have other idea; ts. They believe that, there are other significant items in the society such as, education, security, political stability, and social values so. They say that governments should attend to them.
    • But some people have other ideas; they believe that, there are other significant items in the society such as, education, security, political stability, social values so governments should attend them.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • I personally believe that the economic is a necessary option to success and improve but it is not more important than other items.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I personally believe that the economicy is a necessary option to success and improvement, but it is not moreas important thanas other items.
    • I personally believe that the economicy is a necessary option tofor success and improve but it is not more important than other items.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • Governments think that economic progresses is the key to success because they are able to make new job opportunities for young people so this happen can improve citizen's life standard and decrease crime.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Governments think that the economic progresses is the key to success because they are able to make new job opportunities for young people so this. This can happen canto improve citizen's life standards and to decrease crime.
    • Governments think that economic progresses is the key to success because they are able to make new job opportunities for young people so this happen can improve citizen's life standard and decrease crime.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
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    • Because people do not financial problems so they have free time for spending with their families, going to travel, doing exercise, eating enough and healthy foods and exc.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Because people do not financial problems so, they have free time forto spending time with their families, going to travel, doing exercise, eating enough and healthy foods and, extc.
    • Because people do not financial problems so, they have freeenough time forto spending with their families, going to travel, doing exercise, eating enough and healthy foods and exetc.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • But some people think that even though economic have solved some of people problems especially to delete poverty and improve their life style but it alone is not able to solve other people issues because humans are social and live creations so they have different needs and wishes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • But sSome people think that even though the economicy haves solved some of people’s problems especially to delete, for instance, decreasing poverty and improveing their life style but it, this alone is not able to solve other people’s issues because humans are social and live creations so t. They have different needs and wishes.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • For instance; if governments did not pay attention to education as same as economic, countries would not train honest and goodhearted experts so they will find many big social problems in the future.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • For instance;, if governments did not pay attention to education as the same as with the economicy, countries would not train honest and good-hearted experts, so that they will find many big social problems in the future.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
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    • Because economic, education, security, political stability, social values all of them connect to each other so governments should pay attention all of them unless after some if governments do not attend them they will have huge troubles such as increase crime rate, corruption, divorce and other problems in the future.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • BThis is because economics, education, security, political stability, and social values all of them connect to each other, so governments should pay attention to all of them, unless afterif some if governments do not attend to them they will have huge troubles such as increase in crime rate, corruption, divorce and other problems to come in the future. ¶
    • Because economic, education, security, political stability, social values all of them connect to each other so governments s. Should pay attention to all of them unless after some if governments do not attend them they will have huge troubles such as increased crime rate, corruption, divorce, and other problems in the future.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13