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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. what do you think about it?

Many governments have tried to have good action in their economic all around the world.

Governments think that economic directly contact people life and if governments want to improve their politics and take power they should be successful in their economic.

But some people have other idea; they believe that, there are other significant items in the society such as, education, security, political stability, social values so governments should attend them.

I personally believe that the economic is a necessary option to success and improve but it is not more important than other items.

Governments think that economic progresses is the key to success because they are able to make new job opportunities for young people so this happen can improve citizen's life standard and decrease crime.

Also developed countries do not have problems as same as developing and underdeveloped countries.

Because people do not financial problems so they have free time for spending with their families, going to travel, doing exercise, eating enough and healthy foods and exc.

But some people think that even though economic have solved some of people problems especially to delete poverty and improve their life style but it alone is not able to solve other people issues because humans are social and live creations so they have different needs and wishes.

For instance; if governments did not pay attention to education as same as economic, countries would not train honest and goodhearted experts so they will find many big social problems in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that, human society requires happy and bighearted humans than economical humans.

Although economic plays an important role to develop a nation but it is not enough.

Because economic, education, security, political stability, social values all of them connect to each other so governments should pay attention all of them unless after some if governments do not attend them they will have huge troubles such as increase crime rate, corruption, divorce and other problems in the future.