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Text from lamova_yan - English

  • The letter for Santa

  • Hello, everybody!
  • In English class, I was asked to write a letter to Santa Claus in English with use construction "if", then send its native speaker for review and correction mistakes if they will.
  • So, can you help me with my task, please?)) Hello, dear Santa! How are you?
  • I hope you are doing well) In this year I behaved well: I helped people, I paid much attention to my family, my mother and I worked a lot.
  • I hope, that I deserve some gift from you.)) I wrote a few examples with my wishes to make it easier for you. 1.
  • If I finish the English course, you will give me a trip to an English-speaking country to practice speaking? 2.
  • I very want to live in my own flat, and if I make money to a half flat, you will add me money for the second half of the flat, please? 3.
    • If I finish all project at the job, you will contribute to my dismissal from its, please?
    • I can't decide myself(( 4.
  • If you give me a good cookbook, I will promise that I will learn to cook delicious borscht.
  • And if you want I will invite you to dinner. 5.
  • I tired in this year, and I want to relax.
  • Maybe, if I don't have the tasks at the job, you will give me a trip to sunny countries? 6.
  • If I do the dishes after every eating, you will give me a dishwasher? 7.
    • If you give me a good mood, I will be much kinder to people) 8.
  • If you give me a cat, I will be the happiest man on earth! 9.
  • If you give me ski, I will love skiing) 10.
  • If you are kind, you will give all the people good health. 11.
  • If I begin to do charity work, you will help me?
  • In fact, I am a happy man.
  • Thus, I would like that you will perform wishes people, which have diseases, people in difficult situations and children, which should believe in wonders) Thank you in advance!
    • I hope, you hear me)

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