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    • My daire

    • I woke up at 7:30 PM.
    • Then I went out only the sky was raining after that I walked to my car for take my phone then returned home and I went to eat dinner after that I sat with my family we talk together then I went to a farm to give my birds the food and I sat with it some time then called my cousin asks me to I went with him then I went with him for a walk then I came back home.

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    • Then I went out only the sky was raining after that I walked to my car for take my phone then returned home and I went to eat dinner after that I sat with my family we talk together then I went to a farm to give my birds the food and I sat with it some time then called my cousin asks me to I went with him then I went with him for a walk then I came back home.
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    • Then I went out only the sky was raining after that I walked to my car for take my phone then returned home and I went to eat dinner after that I sat with my family we talk together then I went to a farm to give my birds the food and I sat with it some time then called my cousin asks me to I went with him then I went with him for a walk then I came back home.
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    • Then I went out only the sky was raining after that I walked to my car for take my phone then returned home and I went to eat dinner after that I I`ve looked for my phone every where. i couldn`t finde it. I`ve remembered that last time i used It was in the car so i took the key and got out of the house walking to the car and it was raining. ¶
      then i had dinner and       sat with my family we talk together then. I went to athe farm to give my birds the food and I sat with it some timfood to the birds I sat there for a while .then calledi got a call from my cousin asks me to If went with him then I went with him for a walk then I came back home. can go for a walk? i've said yes.
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