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    • Holiday

    • I love holidays.
    • When I'm on holiday I like travelling.
    • The last Time I travelled, I went to Argentina and Paraguay.
    • I hope I can go to Europe a day.
    • But here in Brazil is also a very beautiful country to enjoy on holiday.
    • I appreciate very much the weather and nature.
    • When I went to Parana, wich is a state here, I knew the waterfalls of the Foz do Iguaçu.
    • Foz do Iguaçu is a city. It is so nice.
    • Feelling the force of the nature is awesome.
    • Also, I didn't know there are a lot of muslin people in Foz do Iguaçu, I knew that 70% of the population is muslin.
    • Their parents are imigrants from Leban, Syria, Saudi Arabia.
    • In Foz do Iguaçu has a mosque and some arabic restaurants.
    • I finally could taste baklava.
    • It is a special sweet I saw for the first time by my turkish friends.
    • I had been wanting to eat it so much.
    • I love learning new cultures and making new friends around the world.
    • I just wish I can go abroad offen.

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