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A special travel
- Everyone has ever dreamed with a special travel.
- I had a holiday that I won’t be able to forget even if I live thousand years.
- I was 27 years old and the Summer was comming.
- It would be the first Summer after my first job.
- I was very nervous because it would be the first time that I’d have money and free time.
- I have had a old car, but it would was driven around the world with my fríend and me.
- We sarted the travel on July, 15th and got home on August 15th with a new car and a suitcase full of money.
- If I say everythings that we did that month, I wouldn’t finish never.
- But I can say how we got the money.
- My friend and me be ton a slot machine, which give us 200€.
- With that money, we bet on a horse ride, where we won 10000€.
- After of that we bet all money on a casino roulette.
- We had one million!!!!
- My friend told me.
- Why don’t travel to Las Vegas.
- I took your suggestion and now we are disgustingly rich.
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