Corrections

Rédigé par carmon - English

  • Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish

    • The issue of people more and more rubbish has aroused a new round heated in recent years.
  • Resulting from a range of gabbish for the reason that people always use something at once and throw it away.
  • For example, people usually go to the fast-food restuarant for dinner which customers would like to wrap it up.
    • At the moment, The boss will provide the majority of plastic bag and lunch box.
  • It is adverse for your health if you frequently eat fast-food.
  • Meanwhile, our around environment is full of junk.
    • In this easay, i intend to explore the effect of this problems along with some solution to it.
  • It widely share that the governments need to raise our environmental awareness in the general public.
  • For example, when we go shopping which we should bring our own bag instead of plastic bag.
  • If people have strong environmental awareness which will reduce a great of rubbish.
  • secondly, The governments request us to recycle.
  • For instance, what we use the paper in the past time which make a comic book , creative box and so on.
  • You not only feel amused but also thinking skills becoem really flexible .
  • That is the best way to decline the quantity of rubbish.
  • By the way of conclusion, i believe that this is likely to become more important in foreseeable life.
  • It, therefore, demands our further consideration.

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