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• Dear sir/Madam, I recently made a long journey by coach with your service.

• But I have to say that I am very disappointed with the service.

• First of all, you had written on your brochure that you had "fast, modern coaches" but what I could see were coaches which old and dirty.

• Secondly, one of your staff, the driver, was rude and did not help us with heavy suitcase.

• Thirdly, coach left thirty minutes late while you said that you provided "reliable, punctual service".

• Finally, the 25% reduction you offered in the brochure would bee only available if we booked one month in advance!

• And we found it very uncomfortable to have such a bad service.

• I hope that your service would be much better in the future.

• Your faithful, Nguyen ------------- Dear Aunt/Uncle ..., It has been nearly ten years since you left our hometown to go to America.

• I am very eager to write to tell you how much has this place changed since then!

• As you still remember, it was an old car park.

• The air becomes much fresher and we feel more peaceful when nature is near to us.

• Finally, they have built a grand mall just at the end of the street, which is a few blocks from our house.

• We often hang out at there.

• There are many more changes but let leave for another time!

• Loving, Nguyen